Looking for some Landing Page feedback 🙏

The blue line at the bottom of some of the text looks too thick and out of place. I would make it thinner and further away from the text or remove it.
"Accelerate data driven action" portion is very unclear on what it's supposed to convey. I'm assuming it's a how it works page. Either remove this or put it on the very bottom of the page prefaced by "how it works"
Customer testimonials should be closer to the bottom. It should come last since users would like to know the basics of your product before knowing the social proof associated with it.
The "Put data at the centre of your day-to-day activities" is quite redundant, especially when clicking on each of the sections only changes the image. People in finance, marketing, and analytics would know their own profession well enough to see the benefits of this product. Remove this section
The images are organized in a messy way. Don't see the point of the blue blobs behind the images. But the fact that the blobs are round and the images are square makes the whole thing look unprofessional and hacked together. Either make the blobs squares as well or make the images into blobs to fit into the blue blobs.

Overall, your home page is way too long and there are sections that are very cluttered. Advice would be to remove some sections.

I do like the concept of the service though.

btw, if you've got the time, check out my product "Evoke" from my profile. I'm currently working on it but I'd love for some honest feedback when it releases.

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1. The blue line at the bottom of some of the text looks too thick and out of place. I would make it thinner and further away from the text or remove it.
2. "Accelerate data driven action" portion is very unclear on what it's supposed to convey. I'm assuming it's a how it works page. Either remove this or put it on the very bottom of the page prefaced by "how it works"
3. Customer testimonials should be closer to the bottom. It should come last since users would like to know the basics of your product before knowing the social proof associated with it.
4. The "Put data at the centre of your day-to-day activities" is quite redundant, especially when clicking on each of the sections only changes the image. People in finance, marketing, and analytics would know their own profession well enough to see the benefits of this product. Remove this section
5. The images are organized in a messy way. Don't see the point of the blue blobs behind the images. But the fact that the blobs are round and the images are square makes the whole thing look unprofessional and hacked together. Either make the blobs squares as well or make the images into blobs to fit into the blue blobs.
Overall, your home page is way too long and there are sections that are very cluttered. Advice would be to remove some sections.

I do like the concept of the service though.

btw, if you've got the time, check out my product "Evoke" from my profile. I'm currently working on it but I'd love for some honest feedback when it releases.
RichardGao

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4 years ago
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