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Looking for your feedback

What questions or objections come up when reading this page?
I’m in the middle of rewriting it, any feedback is appropriate.

Here's the link: https://designcrafter.co/

on December 16, 2022
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    Your landing page overall looks great! Here are just a few changes:
    -"Hiring it's a time-consuming process. The cost of having a full-time senior product designer it's much higher." This is hard to read for me in the FAQ section. Same with here: "If you like to be notified drop your email below."
    -Also felt like the images flashed too quickly where I couldn't read them. Not sure if that was intentional or not. If the idea is to just to show off the design then it's probably fine.

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      Yep, the text needs more work. Thank you, super helpful!

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    1. A lot of your sections are too large, and users might get annoyed having to scroll through so much space. I would suggest narrowing them.

    2. The slider section is confusing. I am presuming they're websites that you've designed. A better way to display it would be in the form of a collage, with an image being enlarged once you click on it. However, I would recommend more that you have an image, and just link to the website you've done design work on once someone clicks on it, so you can essentially demonstrate your web design skills.

    3. I would make the numbers more visible rather than grey for the section where you state how it works. This would make it stand out more.

    4. "What we offer" section's slideshow goes by way too quick, and even then, it's hard to tell what it's supposed to demonstrate. A better way to show what you offer would be to show a different image when someone clicks on one of the options.

    For example, for wireframing, you can show a wireframe you designed, for iOS and Android, show a mobile friendly webpage, for "visual branding" show some graphic designs you've done.

    1. For pricing, make one pricing section and then list down the price by weekly/monthly/annual charges in one section. So far, the only thing that's different for all the options is the price, which makes it seem repetitive since you have repeating text.

    Overall, your website is great elsewise.

    Speaking of websites, I've got one coming soon, and I'd love to get a second pair of eyes on it if you've got the time. FYI, I'm currently developing an AI API that lets users run AI models on the cloud.

    It's still in progress, but you can follow me on twitter for more: https://twitter.com/therealetch

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      Thank you for taking the time Richard! Really thoughtful comments!

      When you post your website ping me here on IH, I’ll be happy to have look.

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    Hi Vasil,

    Your landing page looks very good. Congratulations!

    You asked for first impressions, so these were mine:

    1. Because of the wrapping H1 text and the 5 logos underneath “Plans”, when the page first loaded, all I could really see was a monochromatic page which did not really tell me too much about what this was or how it would benefit me. I had to scroll down to see that. But when I did scroll down a little, the much more engaging, colourful, human and persuasive content was there to see. I would try to move the more engaging content to be clearly above the fold – the first thing users see, not the second.

    2. After the great slideshow content, the next thing you show is “How”, which is a feature, not “Why”, which is a benefit. I’d perhaps consider re-positioning the idea in your first FAQ to be emphasised as a simple strong message about the first benefit you present to prospects, and place that immediately above “How it works”.

    3. Finally, my first reaction, thinking as your target persona, of an “early stage start-up” is the price seems quite steep for businesses at that stage.

    Hope this helps.

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      Thank you for taking the time and actually reading the page.

      Really appreciate the specific feedback!

      On the price thing… I guess I need to justify it better.

      I have done this now for 14+ year in the last 8 working only with early-stage b2b startups. Some of them now fund with millions of $.

      And the pricing for my current clients are even steeper.

      The challenge is, how do you say all that and not sound like you are bragging :)