Looking for Your Opinion on Landing page

The website itself is actually good enough design wise, so I don't really have too much to comment on that.

The main issue is with the copywriting:

There's a lot of awkward grammar, like: "What's current situation" should be "Before PocketCFO". And the GIFs are confusing and don't really say anything.

The quote:

"Without tracking progress,

We're driving blind,

Unaware of our direction,

Waiting for a crash to find."

-Some intelligent person"

Is also awkward and doesn't really convey anything, especially when you don't even have a quote author.

I would suggest you plug in all of your text you currently have into ChatGPT and ask it to reword it for a financial management app. It should fix more problems that I can't even identify.

I'd also add how this app actually makes financial management easier. I understand the benefits here, but I don't understand how the benefits are delivered. If the app hasn't been developed yet, I'd at least have a graphic showing what the menu will look like and how it will work.

Good luck on your project!

Also followed you on twitter and curious to see how this plays out. If you're curious about my project, feel free to follow it as well: https://twitter.com/TheRealEtch

The section with the three boxes in the beginning is unnecessary and the on mouse hover effect on those things especially so.

The animation with the dude is confusing and it's especially confusing that mouse cursor turns into the hand point cursor when over it, yet it's not clickable.

A lot of the wording on the page reads fairly awkward and looks unpolished. For example:

"Only has raw data of transactions
Doesn't paint a clear picture.
Can't help in any financial decision

Since We don't have a simple way to know,
we tends to ignore the importance of tracking report.
That's what killing our gains."

These few lines of text contain multiple grammar mistakes and use inconsistent punctuation, which is not a great look.

Around the "PocketCFO offering" I'm getting bored with all the animations. There is no need for all of these things to be animated. How about some actual screenshots of your product?

Calling yourself a tribe is cringey.

After reading your landing page, I still don't know what your product is. Is it a mobile app? or a web app? You are asking me to join your waiting list, but there is no incentives for me to do so. Am I getting an early adapter pricing? How much is the pricing anyway? You talk a lot about money, but not about how much this thing is going to cost.

The signup for the waiting list says that "No BT". I have no idea what that means. Also, are you assuming every single user of your app is from one country only? If not, why is the international phone number prefix fixed to "+91" ?

Please don't use "submit" as a button caption in any other context than in Fifty Shades of Gray.

Overall, the main problem here is the unpolished wording which makes your product seem amateurish and unfinished. Another thing is that there are almost no colors in the landing page, which you might think is minimal and simple, but in the end, just comes off as being visually boring.