Loop - New Landing Page
hey all.
current landing page here: loophq.com
new design here: https://bit.ly/figmalp
suggested copy:
Focused content from the tools you already use.
Unified. Simplified. Organized
So you can work on what matters most.
Rule the Day with Loop
The new design is great from the design point of view, but the animations made it harder to focus on what matters. Maybe run it once and freeze to let viewer digest the message.
Having static logos tells me it's a business app. The cute animated ones - is it a game? Am I supposed to shoot them?
love this comment
Your current page has this under the fold:
"Apps have changed the way we work. LOOP makes them work together."
This resonated with me. Some of the other copy is a little vague IMO.
Somewhere in the video the narrator says something like, we like X, Y, Z too, that's why we married them - which i also liked.. Oh and looking again, i see you have that on the page currently. 👍
[Edit] I actually really like the page you have right now. Very slick and polished. 💯
thank you!
I think we can still pair down the copy
any thoughts on the first hero line on the page...Rule Your Day etc...
I'm not yet sold on it, to be honest. It's not until i hit the line about "Loop makes them work together" that i really get/appreciate the KVP.
Perhaps if:
Unify Your Work
The Productivity Tools You Already Use
Prioritized . Simplified . Organized .
Read:
Unify Your Productivity Tools.
Prioritized . Simplified . Organized .
🤷♂️ Just thinking out loud here...
Or possibly:
Unify The Productivity Tools You Love.
Prioritize. Simplify. Organize.
That's Loop!
haha maybe i'm making it worse.. 🤦♂️