Made a demo video for a construction photo app, would love feedback

Just finished a demo video for HandyCam, an app that lets contractors create folders, upload before and after site photos, and share access with subcontractors and clients.
The tricky part was making a simple app look worth paying for without overcomplicating it. Kept it under 90 seconds, animated the UI instead of screen recording, and used a conversational voiceover.
Watch it here: https://avido.in/work/handycam-explainer
Curious what you think about the pacing, the voiceover tone, and whether it makes the product click within the first few seconds. I make these for SaaS and indie products at https://avido.in if anyone needs one.