
Hey makers,
https://thememorylane.carrd.co/
I was having a nostalgic moment, remembering my days working as a photographer on a cruise ship, and found myself really indulging in the memories.
I came up with Memory Lane, an idea for an app that will help you remember more details of a memory by using a structured guide to help shine a light on all of its details. I'm thinking of hiring a voice artist to do the audio tracks, which will help explore parts of a memory, be it of a loved one who has passed away or just a happy memory that you want to get more out of.
What do you think of the idea?
Thanks!
I like that the page is simple - you can very quickly understand the product and its benefits.
A key action at this stage will be to identify your target audience. I can completely imagine people of all ages and cultures using this product across the globe, however to start with I think it's important to identify a specific audience e.g. 40-60 years olds who have parents with dementia. I know this point may not be strictly in line with a landing page review, although my thinking is that a more specific target audience may result in changing some of the benefits or features which you have on your landing page.
Squint test fails for me, for 2 reasons. First is that the font used for Memory Lane could be clearer and second the black background doesn't work well (for me). You'll probably receive varied feedback on these formatting points so feel free to ignore me :)
One last point for the landing page is a demo - this isn't last because it's less important however it may require more time so you may not make this update immediately. I really believe your product could benefit from a demo, my mind began imagining what the product might look like whilst reading your landing page so it could be good to proactively address this with a demo. In the future, testimonials would also be beneficial for new customers.
Hope this helps, best of luck!
Hey Krupali,
Thank you so much for your incredibly rich feedback, I truly appreciate it! I hadn't actually thought of a real target audience but your suggestion makes a ton of sense.
And for sure, I do need a demo. My description of what it would do and what someone imagines might be very different indeed; a demo would solidify the concept.
I'll work on it and let you know if you'd like to see it.
Thanks so much again!!
Hi Jon,
No problem, happy to help :)
I look forward to seeing the updates!