I’ve tried to make my app’s landing page load fast, which I’m pretty confident that it does. But I’m not so great with copy. If you could review and answer any one of the questions below, I would appreciate it 👩💻
Conversion — Are you willing to hand over your credit card and sign up right now? If not, what would you need to see to get to that point?
Interest — Rate how well the page sustained your interest on a scale of 1-10. What do you suggest be rewritten or redesigned to help it better sustain your interest?
Clarity — What’s unclear? What unanswered questions are you left with?
Expansion — Did you find something awesome you wanted even more details on?
Thanks in advance!
Nitpick, make aos run only once. It gets anoying when elements keep scrolling in and out as i scroll the website.
Hey, nitpicking is just fine by me! 😂 Thank you and I’ve added the code to make it 👩💻 only run once.
Overall the design looks nice.
Some quick feedback
Hope it helps. Keep going! :)
I’ll rework the CTA phrase a bit. I plan to add social proof once I get the app in the hands of parents.
And I’ll fix that overlap.
Thanks for the feedback!
As a unschooling mother you got me to enter my email address :)
Awesome! Thanks for the confirmation and sign up, Rosie!
Hi Shani,
Just quick feedback - Your Hero Section header is way too low, leaving CTA below the fold . Try to align it with the Header Text in your Phone Mockup I think that's a good starting point. :)
Thank you for taking the time to give me feedback! I’ll definitely reset the CTA up a bit higher.
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Thanks for the feedback, I’ll try out the fonts you suggested to see what works.