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MVP Feedback

Hi,

I just launched MVP of apdex.co. It's uptime and performance monitoring service. Some basic features are implemented and it's time to show it to the world :-)

Need some feedback to landing.

  • Should I change something?
  • What can be better?
  • Is it straightforward enough?
on November 5, 2020
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    First off, I'd recommend you change the headline "improve your users' satisfaction" IMHO is way too generic for what you have.

    1. The language is way too advanced for an average website owner that just wants his website up and running 24/7.

    2. You have too much going on at the same time on the homepage. (multiple CTAs people will get confused)

    3. Your feature or perhaps "learn more" are not defining the benefits your services will provide. People want solution, they don't care how you solve it ¬ just do it.

    4. Add logos or testimonials from people that have tried it out so as to build trust.

    I can do a video breakdown and send you the link if you don't mind. Let me know. Shoot me a DM on twitter.

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      Thank you, DM you on twitter

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        Saw my DM was closed. It's open now and I sent you a message.

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        Alright no problem.

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    I like the simplicity. Recorded some thoughts here

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      Thanks, very helpful. Really appreciate

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    Hello!

    I like the clean design! I think you have to make sure though that the eyes of the visitors are guided to the places you want them. Now I have to guide myself, which makes me tired😂😜)

    First impression (first split second) I didn’t know where to look. I would make the header bigger I think. Then I would move the phrase “ All-in-one monitoring solution” above the paragraph and make it bold.

    The navbar:
    I would add a little more space between the words, or maybe between the characters (play a bit with it). I would also recommend to add a transitions if you click on a header, otherwise I don’t know where I am on the website.

    About the features:
    I would try to draw more of the attention to the text. Now I keep looking at the image and not understanding what it is😂. Maybe make the text a bit bigger? Or let the text start a bit higher, just above the highest point of the image?

    The pricing: looks good, did you already try to add a border with shadow around it, to make it look like it float? Just an idea to try out maybe. I think making a box out of it would make it a little bit nicer. Or maybe a HR.

    Straight to the point, I get the idea, just make sure I first look at the text and then the image:)

    But I’m not an expert or so.

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      Thanks. Really make sense. I will consider all your advices.