Months of work finally resulted in something that is launchable, but with plenty of room for improvement. I’d appreciate any and all feedback on www.featurefocused.io. Thanks!
Good start! My biggest feedback would be to reduce the amount of text on the landing page. Make it more concise and to the point. I’ve found that users don’t read, and instead skim through the content so you have to make sure you get you point across as quickly and simply as possible! I hope this helps! 👋🏻
Thanks! I had definitely worried that the second paragraph was too much, I’ll see what I can do to tighten the whole thing up!
Glad I could help and good luck! 💪🏻
Hey, if you get a chance I’d appreciate any thoughts on the updates text. I cut it down in about half, hopefully it works well. Thanks!
Hey, looking better! My advice would be to do another round of editing and try to cut it down even more if you can!