My book is done. How's the Gumroad preorder page?

Great job, @blakerson! It's really well written copy.

Consider stating what you can get from this book that you can't get anywhere else. $79 is a steep price considering that content on this subject is freely available. I'm sure you have some unique selling points, and I think you should state what they are.

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Best of luck to you.

Congrats on finishing the book! Some thoughts:

1. Landing page subtitle seems a bit wordy. Maybe "Bring your app's analytics from 0 to 100" is more straightforward. I personally don't react well to time scales like "in half a day" or "in 5 minutes" because realistically it always takes longer to implement (which I don't see as a negative, I just want honest). Also see point 5. "0 to 100" is a common phrase which is good, but maybe there is a stronger word that that could add confidence

2. Answer "what are analytics and why do I need them?" It's fine to rely on your audience being aware of analytics, but you cannot rely on them realizing that they need to improve what they've got so far.

3. Add more specificity to who this helps than just "for your project." I think defining some personas will make it more understandable. Is this for SaaS apps? E-Commerce apps? Games? Productivity? All of the above? I am sure your book covers this, but your landing page should as well. You want to answer the question of "is this for me?" very quickly. Even something simple like "whether you're working on a game, SaaS product, or productivity app, setting up analytics correctly will pay dividends."

4. Add supporting content examples. I'm unfamiliar with gumroad, but if possible I would add an excerpt of a case study or other useful info, similar to Amazon's view in to the fist few pages of a book. This is a difficult topic to verbally describe and pitch without showing true value up front.

5. I am not sure about the price of $79 tied to the wording "in half a day." I am not saying this information is not worth $79, but I generally would not pay that much for something that I could learn and implement in half a day. Of course, people pay for courses at this price and higher all the time, but "half a day" may not be your main selling point. An example of an alternative could be something like "Improve your analytics with just 12 lines of code." Then someone might think "well crap, that's easy, but WHICH 12 lines of code?"

Hope this helps!

I agree with the points that @RealNathanLatka made, and I would double down on making all your statements much clearer to the avg person. In addition, I'll say the title image isn't strong enough IMO. I would treat this as a book cover analysis and head over to Amazon. Check out the covers of titles touching similar topics and see what the best-sellers are doing. Make your own version of that so visitors to this page are connecting with the image immediately.

My quick feedback: https://www.loom.com/share/31488d27072648d192f1ea782d45bfb1

Looks good! Instead of 0 to 100, I would maybe go with "accelerate" if that's not too cliche. Since a lot of potential buyers won't be starting from zero