My first landing page (with changes), and a tip for creating yours

The light blueish background on the Browse projects section makes the white text on it difficult to read. And the mobile screenshot next to this section looks like a low quality JPEG with compression artifacts.

The background color in the Join the Waiting List area is almost making my eyes bleed. There are also no incentives for me to join your waiting list. Nor any actual privacy policy related facts about you, just a vague promise that you will only use my email to send me my free membership (whatever that even means).

The Steve Jobs quote seems like a bit too much. As does the wolf photos. Yes, I get it, you are the "wulf pack", but for my taste, you are over-doing the wolf theme. Visually, this landing page reminds me of the website of Colorado Wulf Furries Club.

I would first reconsider the colors and the heavy use of background images. Drop all the wolf photos other than maybe one. Use some other colors than just that one shade of icy blue. Perhaps use some high quality icons somewhere. Then, show off your actual product. Now there is literally one (poor quality) screenshot of your product. More images of your product, less images of wolves. In my opinion.

Thanks so much everyone. More product and high quality images, less wolves and bright colours! For the images I may struggle since I'm doing the design myself for the first time. I designed the app in Figma and then took a screenshot, any tip on how I make the quality higher?
I'm glad everyone understood what the platform was for though!

1. Your logo in the upper left has text that is hard to read due to poor contrasting, and the logo itself also does not blend in well with the background.

2. On the second section, the turquoise does not contrast well with the white text, and overall, bright colors like that make a poor background choice for text.

3. In the third section, the image of the wolves looks like a placeholders stock image. What I would recommend is a more icon-esque depiction, for example, take a look a flaticon.co and create an image with the icons there in Canva.

4. I would also show more of what the product looks like. Is it a social media site? Email list? I'm not sure exactly what it is, though I understand what it's supposed to do.

So I would show maybe a video of what the site is supposed to do or at least some screenshots.

Speaking of websites, I'm currently developing an AI API that allows users to run AI models on the cloud with an API. And I'd love some feedback once our website comes out.

It's still very WIP at the moment, and we don't have a website, but you can check out and follow my twitter for more info once it comes out: https://twitter.com/TheRealEtch

It sounds like you have some issues about the landing page:

1. The background seems too flashy and distracts from the product itself, which can be frustrating for visitors.

2. The color contrast of the text and the background seems like they need to be more optimal, which can make the page difficult to read.

3. There is too much text on the page, which can be overwhelming for visitors.

I would recommend simplifying the background to make it less distracting and improving the color contrast of the text to make it easier to read. You should also try to be more concise in your messaging and highlight the benefits of your product in a clear and easy-to-understand way.

I hope my suggestions are helpful, and let me know if you have any other questions or concerns. I'm always happy to provide more feedback or advice if needed. Good luck with your landing page!