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My first Landing Page - Would you sign up? 🚀

Hey 👋,

I'm Ashish (@selvarajashish), building a journaling app in public.

This is the first time I'm building a landing page for a product before it's launch: https://www.introspekt.app/

Let me know what you think, would you signup?

I read a couple of articles online and tried to make the above the fold section convincing.

Overall:

  • Does it sound interesting?
  • How does the website look?
  • Any other comments?
posted to Icon for group Landing Page Feedback
Landing Page Feedback
on January 22, 2022
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    I almost didn't scroll down because I didn't realise the content continued below the fold. There's a lot of empty space below the email sign up input, could do with pushing it up a bit, I think!

    1. 1

      Pushed it up a bit, thanks!

  2. 2

    Your Twitter Icon does not look like a link (cursor not changing). Clicked on follow anyway :D

    You should definitely add some more information on the landing page when you keep building it. I'm looking forward to following the development.
    Not sure how you are plans look like, but I saw a few projects having a public Trello board to show the users what comes next. I think this is a good extension when building in public. I also thought to add one to our project.

    1. 1

      Fixed the cursor!

      The trello board is a good idea but I might just wait till I finish an MVP and just create a video.

      Thanks for the suggestions!

  3. 2

    Hey Ashish!

    I like the header, but the subheader feels a little bit too vague - I'm not sure what it's trying to convey.

    The website looks pretty simple, I like it. Maybe I'd add another section that tells about some of the features, because right now I have no idea what it's about or how it's different than another journaling app.

    Nice CTA and nice color scheme 👌

    Just my 2 cents, I hope that helps 💪

    1. 2

      Thanks Maxime!

      Good point. I should add a section that talks about the features. Once I have an MVP, I'll also add a video which will hopefully make it clear.

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    The alignment between the texts and the input field could be better. At the moment, the padding on the input field makes the layout looks somewhat awkward.

    I would also thinking about adding some pixel aliasing on the phone in the background - there's a lot of pixelated jagging. Also, the iPhone frame looks a bit weird, it's not "rounded" enough for some reason, almost thought it was an Android frame.

  5. 1

    I think your Hero needs to blend more with the second section, it'll encourage people to scroll

  6. 1

    It would be great to hear how the app will tailor itself to me; will it learn from when/how I enter things, will it start asking questions based on what I write previously? The screenshot shows it as being tailored to me but not how.

    Design looks good; don't personally love the rotating font in the header but understand that it's a marketing message to communicate changing to suit different people!

    1. 1

      Thanks!

      I do need to be more specific, I'm thinking of putting a product video which will hopefully make things clear.

  7. 1

    You should try adjusting towards stating the main feature or solution at the top before asking me for my email. If I was your target audience, I would still be unsure if this product is any better than anything I use currently.

    • Why is this experience better for journaling compared to whatever tool I already have?

    Maybe a simple bold detail that tells me the one feature you provide before you ask for my email. If I have to scroll below your CTA before I understand what is so great, I'm already forgetting to scroll back up.

    If you have data proving your audience asked for the experience you built, make sure you paint that picture to remind any user what they also might be missing out on.

    1. 1

      Good point. I'll probably add a product video that's muted and auto-plays instead of the current graphic to make the selling point clear.

      Thanks!

  8. 1

    Everything has a 1px red border. Is that by design?

    1. 1

      Hey Joe,

      Nope nope nope...left some debugging code in by mistake 😅

      Should be fixed now! Thanks for letting me know!!

      Ashish

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