Landing Page Feedback November 25, 2020

My first pre-order design, how's my landing page?

Matthewbf
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    Damn, the page starts out in an unassuming way, but then BAM, the list of all the founders you're covering and the depth of the research. It takes the visitor aback, pure FOMO moment, and... makes purchase.

    Anyway, that was my experience with the page. Pre-ordered.

    Good job.

  2. 1

    Hi there!

    Colours and fonts look great.

    Suggestion: Make your CTA (Pre-order button) above the fold - the consumer should be able to see it without scrolling down.

    Solution: Put the heading & body text on the left side of your book image instead of on top.

    Hope that helps a little!

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