🤦♂️ My girlfriend hates my landing page, what do you think?
Hey friends! 👋
I came up with a new product idea. My cofounder and I have been doing mom tests to validate the idea and decided to move onto "phase two"; landing page validation!
I'd appreciate if you'd roast our landing page. No context on the idea so that we'll see what you understand from the page itself. ;)
Thanks for your time!
Okay so...
You talk about what your app does but you don't show me why it's BETTER to use your solution.
You explain some features but the benefits of each feature is UNCLEAR
here's an example:
I was in a war-room the other day because our 3rd party platform that supposedly hosts our static content had issues, we got some errors on our side from our gateways about the traffic not going through properly...we went on slack's war-room, then jumped on Zoom, shared screen and found out the culprit after like a bit of digging.
How's ur solution better than Slack + Zoom, tools that we already use ALL the time in our eng team?
About the problem, I know I shouldn't comment but here goes nothing: the issue of updating costumers in REAL-TIME, doesn't really exist. No one wants to know by the exact second what's being worked on. Neither internal or external. At most it's just a best practice inside our eng team to send 30min updates to the non-eng side of the business. That's done literally with notepad and having a process.
No testimonials
No screenshots of your tool
No explanation of how it would integrate with our existing ecosystem
No background of who you and your team building this are and why you're doing it and whether you're experts or nah
0 trust factor in footer
no lead magnet
Made a video for it https://tella.video/video-for-anthony-1