My homepage is driving me CRAZY!
Please, share your thoughts:
https://biteplay.com
Challenges:
- Make they understand why Biteplay is better to find target audience on Youtube.
- Explain to prospects what monetized videos are
(and how to get this videos with our solution) - Show to people how Youtube ads is more target and cheaper than other big ads plataforms like: Facebook, Google and Instagram.
I'll take a note of every words that you share.
Please make cruel or compliments comments (i don't mind),
but give me the exact section that needs improvements in your opinion.
@henriquechaps - I think I understand what your product is and what you're trying to say. I've taken a shot at improving your landing page: see below and let me know if it's helpful.
(Note: I assumed you're going to target this product to existing YouTube advertisers. For now that will be easier than getting an Instagram advertiser, for example, to switch to YouTube.)
--Start--
For a higher ROI on video ads: Advertise on the exact YouTube videos your customers watch
Everyday, your customers watch YouTube content relevant to your category and product. Biteplay is the fastest way to reach those customers where they are.
For example, the best time to reach a fitness customer is when they're watching a fitness video. The best time to reach a car customer is when they're watching a car review video. You get the idea.
Before Biteplay...
Finding highly relevant, trending, ad-supported videos would have soaked up a lot of time. And the process of going through videos one by one was painfully boring.
--Pause--
Am I on the right track? Does it feel like the message is getting clearer and easier to understand?
Social proof from customers + from why and what you or your company knows about YouTube ads?
Have you spent millions on the platform? Let it be known
Hey 👋
I don’t really understand the bit about monetized videos. I assume you can only advertise against monetised videos?
I had a quick crack at a version of the page.. hope you don’t mind. I removed the bit about hijacking as I think that makes it sounds a bit dodgy.
FWIW I’m not a copy writer or marketer - but maybe something slimmed down like:
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H1 Precision Youtube Advertising
H2 We help you to put ads in the best videos and increase sales. Get started instantly with a 7 day free trial.
(Social proof about conversion)
(CTA)
(Briefly Explain why YouTube.)
Increase sales of your products using YouTube ads today.
(CTA)
We make it super simple and fast! Just type in a few keywords relevant to your customers and you'll get a list of hyper-targeted videos where you can place your ads!
(Show minimal animated explainer gif)
Our export tool makes it a breeze to import the YouTube video data directly into YouTube ads saving you hours of time and effort.
(Insert Social proof about how quick and easy it is)
(CTA)
Get started now with a 7 day trial. Or reach out to us for more info at: hello@... we’re always here to help!
HTH
I still don't understand what the product is by reading the headline tbh. Can you turn the video into a gif that autoplays?
I can make it autoplay in wistia player, but i mean... i'm talking about Youtube ads, so it's fair enough use youtube player, right or i am wrong?
I checked your earlier post, but didn't comment, because i didn't understand at all what you are offering, so i just thought that I'm stupid and that it is better to hide my stupidity by not commenting. Anyways...
..Common problem with landing pages is that they don't talk about benefits. But in your case you talk about the benefits 29 times, if i counted correctly, but never tell what the fuck you actually do. Some kind of YouTube advertising solution, but i cannot get anything more specific than that.
That probably wasn't what you wanted to hear, but i hope it helps & best of luck
Man, that's exactly what i want to hear: Problems!
So in this way i can fix it :) it was really helpful.
Of course it makes me think about make huge changes on my homepage :(
BUT THAT'S THE WHOLE POINT OF FEEDBACKS! :D
We basicly discover placements (videos) with monetization enable (cuz creators have to allow this to put ads in front) and make it manually can be really ineficient.
You can't know if they have monetization enable untill verified one by one.
Our solution is: Put your keywords and get a list of tons of videos related to your niche.
Simple as that. Of course we have a lot more features, but that's the main problem we try to fix.
Well, that's the reason about this home is driving me crazy.
Please, what points you think i can change? Some idea?
After reading your "simple as that" explanation, i still don't understand... :)
But. That may be just because I've never advertised on YouTube, or it may be because your explanation has lot of broken English, or both.
Only recommendation I can make is to find people who are in your actual target segment (YouTube advertisers), and get a native English speaker, and then all of you work together on the messaging until it clicks.
well, thanks anyway.