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my landing page does not showcase the idea properly. Looking for a roast πŸ”₯

I think my landing page does not showcase the idea properly which leaves users with unanswered questions.

ITS TIME TO GET ROASTED πŸ”₯
https://www.marketingmatrix.club/

Go check it out and let me know what you think

on April 26, 2024
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    Great start.

    My comments below:

    1. Typo: "Where is the content comming from?" -> "Where is the content coming from?"

    2. Inconsistent CTA: "subscribe", "Get Featured" on top vs. "Join Newsletter" on bottom

    3. Adding specifics would help: "Right decision fast" "Grow your MRR!" -> by how much? 10 days, 10%, 1 hour, etc.

    4. What does the five stars "above 32 makers ❀️ marketing matrix" mean? If you cannot show big company logos or a huge numbers of users, I personally think its better to showcase a smaller number of testimonials (~3).

    5. FAQ -> Currently, you use your FAQ section to answer basic questions (i.e. "What is it exactly?"). When used correctly, the FAQ could be used as a "clincher copy," where you nudge your hesitant page visitors to commit - sometimes, this is a game of inches. In this section, to push your readers over the last mile, you could bring up the most surprising thing, or the most dramatic benefit about your product.