My landing page looks like this after feedback.

A few months ago I posted here the first landing page I've ever designed and asked for feedback. I got some harsh not encouraging comments. Someone even said I should hire someone else to do the job. But, I'm all about learning and and not giving up, so I decided to redraw my landing page following the valuable feedback some people gave me. Here below is the previous landing page vs current one. You can follow this link for a better view: https://learnpine.com