My landing page wants feedback and I will give you my product for free

Hey Victor, I've left a detailed feedback for your website. You can check it out on this link -> https://app.ruttl.com/share/al94aNVKrJOfiUYYrvFq?page=fIBUc5SRbPjEOw1X3jcV

My first impression is that I really like your typography. This is pleasant to read. That being said, my brain has difficulties reading your product name from the logo. I think it's because when I read "builde" I'm expecting it to say "builder", but it doesn't. You could consider making your logo more readable by adding some space between the words "build" and "earn".'

Also, "Profit by kill your excuses" sounds awkward to me. "Profit by killing your excuses" would seem more natural. Then again, I'm not sure whether killing something makes for a great pitch to begin with. I would prefer a pitch to be more positive rather than about killing things.

The main CTA button being white is not very exciting. It doesn't even look like something I could click.

You went a bit overboard with the typography in the "especially these 3 excuses" and now you are using a font that is not easy to read.

Same goes with the section after "Buildearn OS is the system you need to get them done." - It takes way too much effort from me to read this and you haven't yet made me interested enough to invest my time into reading this difficult font text. Also, I find the excessive use of exclamation points amateurish.

The more down I get to the landing page, the more confused I become. Why are you talking about building an operating system? I'm an engineer and to me, like I guess for most people, an operating system means something like Windows or Linux. I don't want to build an operating system. And I'm confused why are you calling your product one, too.

The next section with the blocks and bricks is very confusing. Visually it looks pretty but I have no idea what any of this means.

"During 1 month, every day, you will receive micro-tasks and helop" what is helop?

In the "Do you have any questions?" the first question is about the difference between BuildearnOS Starter and BuildearnOS Base. This is the first time I even noticed these words. I have no idea what these are. If these are your two different product pricing tiers, it's awkward to introduce these in a FAQ like this.

The Features, Preview and Pricing links all take me to the Pricing section and the FAQ link takes me to a non existing URL. This is mind bogglingly confusing.

If I'm supposed to take the main idea of your pitch and ignore all the confusion, I think what you are offering is some kind of system to create a side business. Fair enough. But why should I, as a user, care about what you think? Where is your portfolio of side businesses that you have created? The smallest thing to even indicate anything like that, is the "like me" link in the top part of the page, which only takes to some random other website that seems to show off this BuildearnOS thing. I cannot find anything like a portfolio or anything to indicate that you have any kind of experience or authority to be helping me to build a side business.

I think there might be some good ideas in this, but as it is right now, reading the landing page was a fairly confusing experience and you didn't sell your idea to me. I think this needs a lot of polishing and potentially re-thinking.

Firstly the LP looks solid in a creative way
-Things you can focus on are making the images less size(It takes time to load) or you cam go with the Lazy Load option
-On hero section you kept a Vide embedd which is kinda pointless because its not explaining the product rather than showing it and honsetly the clickablity factor will be less you can directly go with a image of a Dashboard

Hey @Victor🤙 , first of all, I like your landing page overall. I found some issues that I would focus on.

1. I don't understand the meaning of your tagline "Profit by kill your excuses". On the other side, the second line with the description explained it to me perfectly.
2. I found a few typos on the LP, so check it out once again.
3. The name - I read your name together "Buildearn" instead of Build & Earn (I think it was your main intention).
4. Seats available don't fit - I can see 3 different availability - 97, 100, and 98 seats available.

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