Mymynd
Hi,
I have an idea floating around my head and have knocked together a simple landing page. I plan to build this page up with interactive elements over the coming weeks, but require feedback so I can fail/adapt as necessary.
https://piczelspydr-website-trial.now.sh/stories/mymynd
It would be great to get some honest early feedback.
- Does the project spark intrigue?
- Would you pop back frequently to see how it evolves?
- Is the concept relatable?
Thank you for any time you can spare,
Jeff
I spent almost a minute on your website and didn't really understand the idea.
Agreed with FelDev - Jeff having read the landing page I can give my two cents, I think the writing style is too vague and elusive - especially if you're looking for idea validation. Don't necessarily need to throw out the stylistic prose completely, though it seemed a bit overdone in some parts even for the style - in any case the pitch needs to be much clearer / more direct if looking for feedback on the concept or looking to capture/keep someones interest from a business perspective. I'm too unsure of what you're aiming at to give any real feedback on the idea - happy to have a look again if you end up doing a rewrite, just get in touch :) Best of luck!