MyPath - would love to hear your feedback!
Hey guys!
We’ve created a landing page for our product early adopters -www.mypath.ai
Is it clear to you what is our product made for? What we can do better? Any troubles with UX/UI or wording or whatever?
Can you describe in your own words what is MyPath.ai from our landing page?
If you need early access to MyPath just leave us your email.
Thank you for your feedback and have a good day!
There you go! https://app.get-lumo.com/v/1726c6c2-3184-4806-9d0f-73f9985fffd7
Hi Marijn! Thank you for such detailed and thorough feedback! Appreciate it and some points have already fixed :). We are making it better with your help! If you leave your email we will provide early access to the platform.
The hero text (Hello, welcome...) including the subheader (To find out ...) is hard to read against light background. Maybe adding outline (this might be ugly) or generous drop shadow make it better.
Try to be more concise with the text. e.g. instead of "And this is how it works" use "How it works"
Instead of "Go through quick and easy registration" use "Quick and easy registration" etc
In addition to the other suggestions already made.
ALl the best!
Thank you, ksp! Will use it!
You have to work more on copywriting.
Change this and try a catchy headline and better to be short.
Don't repeat texts. You are saying: "MyPath is a career AI assessment" many times in different ways.
Your design is not bad but I don't like the header section. It makes the text hard to read.
Check Frontendor library (will help you build beautiful landing pages by copy-paste).
Check MarketingExamples to learn more about landing page copy-writing.
Good luck!
Hamza thank you! Very useful!
Hi. Imo, design makes text difficult to read, value proposition not clear / convincing + no evidence of AI. Struggling to see this in current guise as anything more than a "your career options" catalogue.
Thank you Rab! Appreciate it!