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Need a feedback on the coming soon page

by Serhii
https://fablebeeapp.com/coming-soon

Hi! What do you think of https://fablebeeapp.com/coming-soon?
Will be grateful for any feedback :)

Serhii's avatarSerhii
submitted this linkon June 18, 2019
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    Hey @v8ever, that sounds like a product I would actually be interested on using, will follow on it's development. Some feedback:

    There' s some inconsistency on icon layout - on the first line you have them above the text and on 2nd line on the left side, I would stick to one or another layout.

    tomswebdesign's avatar tomswebdesign
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      Thanks for the feedback! Yes, the icons are inconsistent yet. I have put them quickly :)

      Have you used any similar products (Buffer, Planoly, Later, etc.)? If so, what features are crucial for you, what aren't?

      Serhii's avatar Serhii
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      7 years ago
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    My first thought: you offer a scheduler for a mainly visual platform, but your landing page has basically no visuals.

    Luqa's avatar Luqa
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    7 years ago
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      It's not a landing page, it's a coming soon page. But visuals are suitable for this case as well =)

      Serhii's avatar Serhii
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      7 years ago
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        Yeah, sorry I meant coming soon page.

        Put some visuals that people would use on instagram and let them see how the product works at the same time. Explain them with pictures instead of words.

        Luqa's avatar Luqa
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          Indeed a great thought, thank you! :)

          Serhii's avatar Serhii
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    Hey! A few thoughts :)

    • I like the colours, found them to be quite visually pleasing
    • I wasn't quite sure what 'say no to overwhelmed apps' meant. Do you mean 'say no to being overwhelmed...' or 'say no to overwhelming apps'?
    • The email and join button are kinda squished in there, more space between?
    • Maybe this has a reason behind it, but I wasn't sure if 'bored' was the best word under visual calendar? Does this best describe your target customer's pain, boredom? Or is it that they're overwhelmed? Wasting time?
    • Type under the recycle posts section: 'quicker' not 'quicklier'
    • the strikeouts in the pricing page are hard to read/look at since it's not a clear strikeout (instead it's multiple lines)
    • Under the 'still not convinced', you say 'here are the benefits' , but you've already given benefits above so that's a bit confusing. Some of them are new things, some of them are redundant to what's above. Is this part necessary? Is there a better way to display this without being redundant?
    • This is small, but you call it a 'waitlist' for one CTA and a 'waiting list' for another.
    • Not a deal breaker, but your email is a personal gmail when I go to contact you. Might be better to have a biz email
    emmie's avatar emmie
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      Thanks a lot for the widened feedback!

      I wasn't quite sure what 'say no to overwhelmed apps' meant. Do you mean 'say no to being overwhelmed...' or 'say no to overwhelming apps'?
      Oh yes, it's my bad English :) I meant "say no to complicated apps in terms of interfaces"

      The email and join button are kinda squished in there, more space between?
      Totally agree

      Maybe this has a reason behind it, but I wasn't sure if 'bored' was the best word under visual calendar? Does this best describe your target customer's pain, boredom? Or is it that they're overwhelmed? Wasting time?
      I meant a complexity of existing solutions, you're right, it seems it's not a boredom, hm....

      the strikeouts in the pricing page are hard to read/look at since it's not a clear strikeout
      Agree!

      Under the 'still not convinced', you say 'here are the benefits' , but you've already given benefits above so that's a bit confusing. Some of them are new things, some of them are redundant to what's above. Is this part necessary? Is there a better way to display this without being redundant?
      Do you propose to mention only new benefits/features? I don't really know what to place to this section, as I mentioned most of features above. Maybe it makes sense to have a one section with features, a bit extended.

      This is small, but you call it a 'waitlist' for one CTA and a 'waiting list' for another.
      Oh yes, I've not noticed

      Not a deal breaker, but your email is a personal gmail when I go to contact you. Might be better to have a biz email
      Agree, biz email in process of creating, so I've put mine :)

      Serhii's avatar Serhii
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