Need a genuine feedback on landing page
Hello everyone.
Just a month ago, I've soft-launched a link-in-bio for paid asking, called '20min' (https://20min.store)
And as like many others, I've written a post seeking feedback on my landing page.
And the comments were pretty positive, saying the content and BM are both good. (or could there be a tendency toward giving positive feedback due to its warmhearted community nature?)
Previous post:
https://www.indiehackers.com/post/seeking-feedback-on-my-landing-page-2790ef3f45
So with some confidence, I've tried to reach out to a group of people whom I thought were my target customers(office professionals, micro-influencers, freelancers, etc) but gained 0 activated conversion.
I know when things go wrong, many things could go wrong.
- It could be poorly written UX writings
- Too much animation, causing distraction or even a bit of fishiness
- 12% of Commission fee seems harshy
- Or I'm seemply targeting wrong type of people
- or my reach out method is just poor
- so many so on
Before I simply call it an end, I want to explore possibilities that with little bit of adjustment, things may go right.
And in order to do that, I need an honest(it might be brutal) from my peer indiehackers who know what such struggling feels like.
If you could give me a more honest feedback on my product,
I'd be sooos happy to accept them, and I will for sure help you in return when you need help like this.
Could anyone give me some help, thinking of me as a past/present you who have struggled/is still struggling?
