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Need critique for MVP landing page

Hello IH,

Eighth Studio helps to create affordable and successful video marketing. We made more than 20K orders on the freelance and recently launched our MVP. This month we will achieve 10K+ revenue per 30 days and I believe that It's time to upgrade and refresh our landing page. I really need your feedback and critique.

Link: https://eighth.studio

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to check it out, I really appreciate it 🙏

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    Hi Illia,

    I can only agree with the other comments here, the service is pretty unique afaik.
    So i‘ll just leave aside the business aspect and try to provide some feedback for the look and feel:

    1. on slow internet, the hero section doesn‘t work properly, so maybe you can provide some smaller fallback illustration or image
    2. the first section could use some whitespace (to my eye)
    3. as it seems youre doing lazy loading of images and videos -> great! If you got time, put in some ghost elements to give a hint that there will be real content any time
    4. your chatbot changes the title, which i personally hate. It hides the name of your business... maybe this is one purpose, then stick with it, it‘s likely that you have thought a lot more about it than me
    5. in the section with „get more extra options“, i really don‘t get why the green underline is so far away from either „options“ or „more“

    Overall i dig the style and think it‘s very cool to go with something more unusual here, great job!
    Btw, i‘m not trying to be picky or anything, these are just really minor things i noticed :)

    Keep going 👍

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      Thank you very much for your help! It is really important to me.

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    Idea/service is easy to understand, good intro. Hits the spot.

    Lots of info on the (first) landing page, but I also do it this way.

    On mobile, the Intercom chat shows AND the icon - totally clutters the first impression view. I would hide the chat and only show the icon.

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      Thank you. I will definitely implement your recommendation.

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    Hi @video_lover,

    The service that you offer is pretty unique. I really like it !!

    The website is pretty clear with your offerings and how you stand out.

    It's complete, as you even offer a money-back guarantee.

    Launch it on ProductHunt.com

    You guys will do great!! Let me know if you need any help.

    All the best.

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      Thank you for such great words :) But, I hope for some recommendations.

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        Hi @video_lover, I couldn't get a free demo after I uploaded my logo and tagline. It has bugs and needs to be improved.

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          Can you send me your e-mail? Usually, it takes 24 hours to get delivery.

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