Need critique for MVP landing page

Hi Illia, 1) Product looks nice, I would prefer a brighter background color though, 2) You say in the heading it takes 24 hours and then in the download part in the section after, you say 12 hours, so which one is it? 3) Who is DYI (you keep mentioning them) and if they are that famous why do you have the same price, since you just started, my first reaction would be to check DYI first and then get back to you. 4) I think your before and after edit could be better, I wasn't that impressed tbh. 5) Last thing, but that depends on the person, I feel the page is too long and would be better off separated to 2-3 pages.

Hello!

First thing I notice, the first phrase “video for your business or blog from pro-designers” is kinda long and not that nice in my opinion. How about “professional videos for your online presence”, or something in those lines.

The second phrase also isn’t that nice in my opinion. I would remove the “a” and make it websites, advertising, blogs and social networks ......

Also the second big header, remove “and working”, it is not really needed.

Take away: Keep it short and simple!

Anyways, the design!
I love it! I really like the colors, but I think it’s a shame that green is missing in the favicon. Now it seems to be a favicon for a complete other website.

I like the key stages thing a lot, but again the text just doesn’t grasp me. A paragraph start with “ And an individual project manager.” isn’t clear to me. Create a new sentence there that says that they will also be assigned a project manager. Try to find a synonym for “assign” since you already used that in the first paragraph.

Another header, “ You know that, don't you?” know what??

Anyways, I would have a good look at your text, but I like the design!

PS although it should have been part of the first impression I only just saw the sentence “ DURING 24 HOURS FROM THE MOMENT OF ORDER” which without thinking doesn’t make sense for me. And I am lazy and don’t want to think hmm, maybe they mean the video in 24 hours, or a response in 24 hours. I

Hope it helps!

Hi Illia,

1. What kind of videos? In your main page it says logo animations, but in the link you provided it does not mention what kind. Is it a logo video? Marketing? Product demo?
2. There's nothing better than showing an example of the videos you already prepared. Display it without requesting the visitor to click on a button.
3. The social proof is at the bottom of your landing page. I would start with it! You have 10,000 customers already, it's a big deal.
4. DURING 24 HOURS FROM THE MOMENT OF ORDER - not sure During is the right word there.
5. The key stages for some reason start at the Discuss tab.

Good luck :)

I gave the site a ten second scan and I did not entirely understand the product. The limited advice I can give is: Make the first sentence I read encapsulate the value of your product. Even if it is reductive, or overly simple. "Make quality videos for the price of lunch" would be an example. You can explain how you will do this later. If you have captured my interest. I think the acid test is to ask someone who is not in your field/domain to tell YOU, what the product is based on the very first headline sentence they read, if they don't get it, then iterate until they do.