Need feadback on copy for my saas
Hi, so I run this saas https://convertixo.com which can convert any website into android and iOS apps
We are planing to launch it on app sumo so we created a description for the product listing, now looking for feedback.
Here is the copy I wrote using bard do you think it is good enough?
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Are you not going to open with your well worded USP
Convert your website to an Android/iOS app, within 5 minutes.
Love this. The copy speaks directly to audiences.
To maybe make it convert better or advance the copy, you can also have something like;
Convert your {website-builder} website to an android/iOS app within 5 minutes.
Website builder variables: WordPress, Webflow, Wix, Shopify, etc.
So you have a dynamic text that speaks to audiences without thinking which platform is possible.
We will do that, thank you for your feedback
Second this.
Thank you for the feedback, yes I also now think we will open with that.
You can also make a programmatic SEO page out of this.
Convert your {website-builder} website to an android/iOS app within 5 minutes.
Website builder variables: WordPress, Webflow, Wix, Shopify, etc.
Each page carries a variable to rank for different search quaries on the web.
Include on the homepage an animated visual of how quick it work or how it work to capture user attention.
Thank you very much for the help, we will do this
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