Need feedback for my new SaaS landing page!

Hey there,

I've developed more than 8 website projects with my clients, mostly focusing on front-end development. Additionally, I have worked as a Growth Intern, so I have some knowledge in this field.

Firstly, I like the layout of your site. The design looks nice. However, I suggest adding some margin to the sides of your navbar.

I enjoyed your message about "Next Level Tweet." I recommend emphasizing this sentence and incorporating it into other sections as well. By doing so, potential customers can easily connect with this message and understand your product better.

You have four different icons after your first call-to-action. I believe you don't need them, so consider removing them.

You have three sections under the "Features Ready to Supercharge Your Tweets" section. I suggest reversing the second section. In other words, place the image on the right side and the text on the left side. This way, when users scroll down, it will capture their attention.

Regarding your pricing model design, aim for consistency. For example, each card should have three bullet points. Having different calls-to-action on each card can confuse users. Stick to one clear call-to-action, such as "Go to Next Level Tweet" or "Buy Now." Lastly, consider simply stating "Free" for your free plan instead of "$0."

Last but not least, the waitlist form at the bottom of the page is not displaying properly. Currently, only the first name input is visible.

I hope these suggestions help you. Good luck!

The thing that's missing is the "Why"

Why would you use this, what problems it solves, and why would you pay $20/mo+ to solve them with your product.

Otherwise, it's a cool looking page, great work so far!

Looks sexy! There's something up with the fields in the waitlist area

you must fix the form at the end of the page

On a cursory glance, I felt it was great for a start. The footer seems out of place in your design though

Hey there, some initial reactions!:

• Nice and clean design overall! It doesn't need to be too busy
• Hero section paragraph text needs to be more specific on how it works. You've enticed me with the header "Next-Level Tweet Writing with AI Technology" but I'd rather read how BetterTweet is going to do that for me.
• Mockups need to be larger resolution - can't really see what's going on and can't really see the words inside. I suggest not using the shape of a phone mockup to illustrate your functionalities, as it limits the space you get to use.
• Can't give too much advice on copywriting, but what comes to mind is - what makes this tool more special than someone using ChatGPT?

Other than these minor things, the overall message is clear and you should be focusing on getting this landing page out there to as many people as possible! Don't worry about whether your design is shit or not. The signups are more important. Over time you'll spot that you'd need to fix your copywriting or tweak the design a little. It's a process for sure!

Hi there, I'm a design enthusiast and Marketing representative at UIHUT B2B Design Marketing and I checked out your landing page for BetterTweet.io. It's a nice idea to help people write better tweets with AI and other features. Here are some tips to make it better:

• Use a catchy headline that summarizes the value proposition of your product. For example, something like "Write tweets that get more engagement with BetterTweet.io" or "The ultimate tool for tweeting like a pro".

• Add some social proof to show that others trust and use your product. For example, you can display some testimonials from beta users, some logos of reputable customers or partners, or some metrics like the number of users or tweets generated.

• Showcase your features with screenshots or videos demonstrating how your product works and its benefits. For example, you can show how the AI-enhanced tweets look like, how the grammar and language errors are corrected, and how the idea board helps with brainstorming.

• Include a clear call to action that invites visitors to join your waitlist or sign up for a free trial. For example, you can use a button that says "Join the waitlist" or "Get early access" and place it prominently on the page.

• Optimize your page for mobile devices as many people browse the web on their phones. For example, you can use responsive design, reduce the size of images and fonts, and avoid horizontal scrolling.

I hope these tips help you improve your landing page and attract more users. Good luck with your launch!

Great work with the design. Some pointers from a customer pov:

-would feel more natural to see a lil more animation delay on the section headings.
-"Join the Waitlist and Get 50% OFF on Premium Plans!" typography seems a lil off to the naked eye, maybe the capitalization or the fontsize+bold combo
-dark theme optionality!

Overall, great work! wishing you lots of success and customer traffic!

Like the look and feel of your page. Looks clean!
Feedback:

• Image size of the Feature images is too small, you can't read anything there.
• Might also be better to focus on a few things, rather than showing too many screens at once with too much text
• Color choice for the "popular option" I'd rather use a purple tone instead of a blue one to keep it consistent.

But otherwise great, keep it going!

Hi,

I think your landing page looks clean and professional. I like the color scheme and the typography. The headline and the subheading are clear and catchy. The features and benefits are well explained and illustrated with screenshots. The testimonials and the pricing plans are also convincing and attractive.

Good luck with your SaaS!

I checked it out. I think it's sleek. Only feedback would be on the footer. I think the double horizontal lines could be in a thinner color, say gray with opacity on 0.7. I'm no designer but I think it would look better that way.

Hello, I'm not fan about the Cygre font-family and the images are very low quality.
Maybe you can use the real logos for Android and Chrome (with colors).
Except that I like the design!

Hey @theankitnet, congrats on your landing page!

A few questions pop up in my mind;

• Who is your target customer? Content creators, social media marketers, amateur Twitter users?
• What is the ultimate problem you are trying to solve for your customer? People do not buy products, they buy solutions to their problems. Which problem are you solving with this landing page?
• What is your value proposition? Are you creating value in terms of AI-built tweets or grammar-free tweets?
• Who is your competition and how are you going to differentiate yourself from the competition? There are hundreds of AI solutions and established grammar solutions like Grammarly. Besides, there is Hootsuite, Buffer, and similar social media services that can quickly build AI into their existing platforms.

1. I would like to confirm that it appears the fonts are not loading properly, and instead, Times New Roman is being displayed.
2. The inclusion of the Android logo and other logos - I'm unsure about their intended purpose.
3. The footer could benefit from some additional attention and improvements.
4. The blog section - it seems that it didn't turn out as expected, and it requires further refinement.

I've been considering if I could be of assistance with this matter. I would be more than happy to create a customized template for your company using Framer. With a budget of around $40-50, you would have a fully tailored solution that aligns perfectly with your product.

Hey @theankitnet 👋

Here's some feedback, hope it helps:

• Your fonts are showing as a Times New Roman style serif on my Chrome browser (I'm on Mac). It doesn't look right. When I inspect the font, I see 'Cygre' listed, which I know is a sans-serif font along the lines of Poppins. Double check the font files you're using. I don't think they're loading correctly.

• You've used 'grammar' (correct) and 'grammer' (incorrect) interchangeably, which is a bit of a "D'oh!" moment, given your product. The app screens just below the hero section show 'Grammer'. You should look to fix that ASAP.

• I think the desktop layout is simple and there's nothing wrong with it. All too often, people (usually from a design background) harp on about things needing to look cool, trendy or modern. They covet pushing boundaries, and salivate over websites showcased on Awwwards, when in reality nobody else thinks like that. People want the familiar; they want simple - it converts better because it's easier to use. Be wary of the background of people who tell you to make this more 'visually engaging' or 'exciting'. They're not necessarily your audience.

• I'm not sure I'd have the price plan CTAs available when the only real option is to join a waitlist. You can argue over whether or not to show the price plans at this stage at all, but if you decide that's the right move, consider changing the CTAs of the price plans to reflect the fact they have to join the waitlist.

• The other point to make about your price plans is the 50% off 'early adopter' offer. Are those prices shown WITH or WITHOUT the 50% discount? That's not clear at all. If it's WITH, then consider putting an early adopter price on there, with the normal price scored out. Don't make people think or work out the cost in their heads.

There's undoubtedly other points to make about the copy, but that should be enough to hopefully get you thinking.

Best of luck with it.