Need feedback on landing page

Hi @irishgeoff

Page can be massively improved.

I would use a properly designed template. The page at the moment looks slightly spammy.

Also, would remove the newsletter option. Why would people sign up for a newsletter? Its a distraction, focus on the main CTA.

thanks
Waseem

You don't need a designer you need a free, paid template or a page builder.

It will make your website look more trustworthy.

I would check out https://themes.gohugo.io/ for some idea for themes for landing pages. Also, a lot of words on the page. I think there should only be one or two things on the landing page to catch someones attention, then an option to scroll down to learn more. When I first pulled up the page I wasn't sure what to read first. Also, Would have an image show fully if it is on landing page (not cut off halfway the phone is)

Visitor probably knows about privacy, that's the reason he visited your site, thus these lines are useless:

Protect Your Online Privacy.
Hide Your Real Phone Number.
Create Accounts Without A Mobile Phone Or SIM Card.
On the other hand they may be important for SEO, but I am not skilled enough to evaluate this.

You should better use any of templates for CTA sites. Show your offer and pricing, how can I reuse the phone number (if I need to use it again after a year) and that's all. Newsletter is unnecessary.

Hey Man. Navbar is transparent on mobile phones? Anyway, Landing page is good. Heading is fine it clearly conveys its message but it'd be great if you could add an illustration of something like that to explain the actual process of your service in 1-3 steps.

That'd be a great addition since it only has only two sections and to be honest I didn't even read the whole features section.
Honestly I think nobody likes to read big paragraph especially on Landing Pages.

Search undraw on Google and you'd find some cool illustrations for free.
Hope it helps :)