Need Feedback on the MVP Website

I don’t think the headline communicates your value proposition well. At the first sight I don’t understand what it is, only to find you’re talking about a content discovery platform. My suggestion is to use the solution of the problem that you’re describing from the “Problem” section and present it in the headline.

Another thing, it made me wondering what’s the difference between Brytebook and Substack – also with some similar platforms as well. So it’s better if you could work on your value proposition (again), or provide a demo video or something that’s more digestible.

Bonus point: Your logo at the top left corner is very small and unnoticeable on mobile.

Otherwise, it’s a decent landing page to move forward. Keep going and hope the feedback above helps.

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I don’t think the headline communicates your value proposition well. At the first sight I don’t understand what it is, only to find you’re talking about a content discovery platform. My suggestion is to use the solution of the problem that you’re describing from the “Problem” section and present it in the headline.

Another thing, it made me wondering what’s the difference between Brytebook and Substack – also with some similar platforms as well. So it’s better if you could work on your value proposition (again), or provide a demo video or something that’s more digestible.

Bonus point: Your logo at the top left corner is very small and unnoticeable on mobile.

Otherwise, it’s a decent landing page to move forward. Keep going and hope the feedback above helps.

wilbertliu

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5 years ago
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  Thanks a lot. I'll look into it.
  
  Samyak
  
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  5 years ago
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