Need overall feedback on my Landing Page
http://stylesandme.com
We are a London based startup, with our product launching in 4 weeks.
Looking for general feedback on the landing page, anything from the design to the text.
We are a London based startup, with our product launching in 4 weeks.
Looking for general feedback on the landing page, anything from the design to the text.
looks like a great landing page. is there actual functionality. pardon after a 25 seconds browsing about found just a form.
Not all sections are fully functional yet, and 25seconds to find the form :o I need to fix that up maybe.
Hey Alfie, doublecheck mobile. Some fonts get super tiny and buttons don't resize. Other than that, copy is great.
Thanks for the feedback @Butvidas, I'll make note of that and add that to the list of changes
HI @ChubbyChucker, the copy is good and it is quite easy to understand what your website is about. I would only focus on the color of the menu bar and the layout of the services section. It can be made better.
Thank you for your comments @himanshu_s, I'll get onto changing that as it seems to be a common thought.
Hi, overall looks good. But here are some of my thoughts:
Hi tbotnar, thank you for the thorough analysis.
Would you suggest having the links instead of a 'Menu' icon ?
Because it's a transparent header, I'm afraid the logo will over lap the text and images, you think we should make the header with a white background ?
Great shout, will look at doing this.
Will play about with this
Yeah, these are yet to be clickable, I just need to sort out the pages for those
Yes, I think they have been designed like that, so the colour covers from left to right on hover.
Thanks for you feedback tbotnar
Hi,
just a quick note: the links on the bottom footer go nowhere which is not a great UX, all the rest is OK from a quick point of view
Hi Enrico, yeah, I am aware of that, but you have reminded me that I do need to get those pages sorted out.
Thank you for your feedback
Have a more 50/50 male/ female. as most beauty apps in london always focus on women.
Thank you for your feedback, so you would suggest adding a few more male images to the website ?
yes, also more male services, you would be surprised what men use.
We were looking at having Male Grooming as the category, and having sub categories for each one.
But I appreciate the comments, keeps me on my toes