I'd love to hear your thoughts and advice on the landing page for ReelCards. My friends and I came up with the idea and decided to hackathon together a site with Carrd over the weekend. We plan to start marketing and trying to drive sales this week, so any feedback you have would be great. Don't hold back (:
Thank you!
OK, let's get into it.
For starters I love the idea and you are very close. Right off the bat I liked the initial experience. First impression was very positive.
VALUE YOU OFFER THAT I WANT:
If you can help me capture such a heart-felt message for someone I love on a special occasion then I'm all in and I'll give you my money.
BOTTOM LINE: Yes, go forward. Excellent! The emotion of the video made me feel like I could accomplish a much more meaningful gift for someone I love. That essence, that you help people accomplish the giving of something more special, is the key element of your offering. Your value is this meaningfulness and not the technical accomplishment of your product. The technical can get in the way.
Good. Good. Good! Go get 'em!
One more thing. I love this line:
"Your Dad doesn't want another cheesy Father's Day gift.
Give a card worth giving by creating a memory worth sharing."
Thank you for the awesome feedback. You gave me a lot to think about. I will start by improving the sales copy and saving the instructions for after the sale is made.
Why complicate life with NFC? (And lose potential customers)
Without audio I can't get the video, nor fully understand from the rest of the copy
Is this just a site that I push the video to?
What do the cards designs layer have to do with the videos?
What do I "Buy" really?
Thank you for the feedback. I'll try to get the video to play with sound by default. I was trying earlier but ran into some issues. I'll also work on adding some content to make what we are actually selling more clear.
I wouldn't play the audio by default. I liked it playing by default on mute. IMHO.
I mean I browse on mute by choise at the moment and is statistically high for non commited interactions, so it would be good to communicate by visual means not just audio if possible