Need some feedback on my landing page

Hi Dervis,

Positives:

1. Good design. Nice layout. Good use of illustrations.

Here are some suggestions to improve the landing page.

1. The hero section needs more space so that the Call to actions don't get overlooked.

2. The headline is too generic. Say it clear what you do and what will be the value addition ( is it time saving, is it bespoke website for lower cost). Express the value addition to get the attention.

3. The copy in throughout the website is more about features. Describe the features in the pricing section. The rest of the landing page needs to convey the pain points you solve for the small businesses. For example, you save them time and money by providing web development, web design, hosting, maintenance all under one roof in an affordable price. Leverage this. Talk more about the value you deliver than the features.

4. All the packages look the same. Experiment with popular package pricing. Like highlighting the middle one or the first one to make it easy for your target audience to make a choice when in doubt.

5. It's great to show the discount over the navbar. The discount should also be highlighted on the pricing section too.

Hope this helps.

I love the design but it was way too long - I left more specific feedback on the UI itself here: https://capsule.click/commentary/f81e7341-205b-4155-98d8-c514b73a2c48
You can respond directly to my comments there too