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Need Some Honest Landing Page Feedback

Hey everyone,

I recently built a landing page to validate my idea, and I would love to get feedback from the community!

Here's the landing page: www.redflow.co

I'd love to know:

  1. What do you think of the design/aesthetics?
  2. Is the messaging clear to you?
  3. What impression does the page visuals give you of the business?
  4. Is it clear what the next steps/CTA is?
  5. What, if anything, is missing for you to take the next steps?
  6. Are there any blockers or deal breakers to kill your interest in the service?

Looking for an honest review that will help me improve!

Thank you for your time, appreciate it.

on April 25, 2023
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    I dont trust a site that does not have testimonials. Please add that.

  2. 1

    After doing some research, I won't be pursuing this idea. Spoke with someone at a competitor and my the conclusion on my research was that Reddit is not a reliable platform to build on. They easily ban users for sending too many DMs.
    Feel free to take the idea if you like it tho, there's clearly demand for this sort of platform!

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    I liked your page but i would suggest you should add other CTA instead of "stay in touch" in the bottom of your page.

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    When it comes to messaging - the message is clear. I do not feel that I should use your service. There is a trend for minimalism when it comes to saas, but the storytelling layer is also important.

    When it comes to aesthetics - I like to be brutally honest every time. It looks like something done very fast and It does not build any trust on my side. It has a more "underground" vibe, not the company I would trust. I would say using any of the amazing webflow or even framer templates or joining forces with some designer would benefit you in the future.

  5. 1

    the landing page is great with respect to all the points. the images can be made a little more better, but overall it conveys well

  6. 1

    I think your landing page looks great overall! The messaging is clear and the visuals are eye-catching. One thing that could potentially improve conversions is adding social proof, such as customer testimonials or case studies.

    Also, have you considered using an app like Fordeer: Invoice Order Printer for your Shopify store? It's a free and user-friendly invoicing app that can help streamline your invoicing process and save you time. Just a thought, hope it helps!

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    Hi Q,
    the message is clear, I would move the scroll of the first CTA to the buy box instead of the first section.
    The font seems quite standard, make something more unique can be more attractive.
    I'm missing a back button to the stripe payment page.
    The favicon with black background is not in line with the light theme of the page.

    Hope this helps :-)

  8. 1

    Hi @qfoster,

    In my opinion, the CI is very well done. The brand name, the colors and the logo are intuitively in line with the product.

    Personally, I think it's very good that you don't "fake it till you make it", but openly talk about what early adopters can expect once you've built the tool.

    The fact that the page looks a bit empty is therefore secondary. The product features are easy to understand.

    However, I personally miss a roadmap or a statement about when to expect the promised features approximately.

    Therefore, I would suggest that you consider milestones (optionally with ETA) at which stage of development you will make which feature available to your early adopters. Being a developer myself, I know that every feature takes time to be ready to ship. From this experience, I'm a bit reluctant because your landing page gives me the impression that you want to develop the project at once before I as an early adopter can use it.

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    You need to concentrate on the colors other than that everything is good.

  10. 1

    The call-to-action button is prominent and stands out from the rest of the page.
    The text on the button is clear and actionable.
    However, it could be more specific and informative about what will happen when the user clicks the button, such as "Sign up for a free trial" or "Join our beta program".

    While the landing page provides a good overview of the product and its features, it would be helpful to provide more information on pricing and plans.
    It may also be helpful to provide some customer testimonials or case studies to showcase the value of your product.

  11. 1

    Hey @qfoster , first of all, I understand your landing page and proposition. Design looks good, but I'm not a big fan of animation, and I would rid off the dots flying around (my opinion). It has a clear CTA, I have to pay you $99 LTD for access to your product. On the other side, I would never pay before product is ready because I don't know which quality of the product you deliver. For me MVP is a minimum to pay for a product. Also, I wouldn't pay for non-existent product when competitors' products are on the market (Howitzer, for example).

    Hope it helps. If you need more feedback, I'm building Userdome - a platform for acquiring feedback and first users. I'm currently looking for first 10 products (and their founders) to do cross-feedback. You're invited if you're interested. Let me know and good luck with your product.

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      Thanks for that Jacob! Will check your start-up out.
      And you're right, the $99 is a bit of a push. I don't think I'll end up building it as Reddit doesn't seem to be a good platform to build on.

  12. 1

    Hi there! :)

    First of all nice breakdown of the feedback request, it makes it easy to understand what you are looking for!

    Unfortunately I am super bad at UX/UI design so don't expect too much from me in this sense :)

    The value proposition of the project is clear and well exposed, personally I don't like to much the shading on the text and I prefer flat designs in general because I find them less distracting.

    The star field is nice at first but after few seconds it is annoying, maybe you can disable it on scroll or after few seconds.

    I am not a user of this kind of services (yet) but the price looks right for the early bird, anyway I would wait for more feedback in this regard because I don't know this market and how the competition (if any) is doing their pricing.

    I hope this comment will be helpful and I wish you the best for your project!

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      Thanks for sharing, I appreciate it!

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