Hi everyone,
I'm building an interactive learning platform and I really need someone who can give me some good feedback on its feasibility.
While my final user is not techy, I accept any feedback.
Hit me please at
bernardo.theparzival@gmail.com
Find my first wanna be Landing here (I think I'm not there yet)
https://parzival.unicornplatform.com/home-page/
A few observations / suggestions:
Your message « Learn digital skills », « for the future of jobs » is too hand wavy, buzzwordy and sounds like a pitch of a large B2B consultancy to some clueless CIO. Be concrete about what your platform teaches.
« One seat for one seat » is needlessly altruistic, at a stage where your biggest differentiator is the product. Companies resolved to these strategies in two types of situations:
1- The venture is fundamentally vision driven, think OLPC Foundation
2- You’ve saturated the market and there’s no way left for you to differentiate in terms of product/service (think massive corporations like Merck or Bayer etc)
Other than that visually I find the page pleasing and well done (although the classy black and white logo doesn’t mix up so well with the flashy colorful rest of the page imo, but ymmv!)
Good luck for the rest :D
Ok, how do you differentiate yourself? There is a lot of platforms like yours.
Hi there Tiltforindie, and thank you very much for replying!
Differentiation:
By the way, when you are going to market it- you have to focus on some real values. Why people need this? They dont care about knowledge for knowledge- they care about their career, ability to start some business, to be faster in current tasks etc. not on your 1 &2 points