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Need Your Feedback on the Landingpage

by Nima Mobaraki

Hey Guys,

would you please share your comments about the landing pages with me?

https://cavaapp.com/youth-landingpage/
https://cavaapp.com/adolescents/

Thanks

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on March 16, 2022
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    https://cavaapp.com

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    Doesn’t look good on mobile view. A bit cluttered in some areas. No value proposition. No ‘what’s in it for me?’ No ‘why?’ Testimonials alone aren’t enough. Bad copy. Bad designs. Too much lag when loading.

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      I appreciate you sharing that, thank you

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    I suggest to improve the overall graphic design of the site.

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      thank you, what about the copies?

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        I'm not an expert copywriter but I suggest to invest some money and hire a native freelance copywriter to revise the page.

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          Sure, thank you again :)

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      Thank you, I really appreciate your comments. I forgot to mention that, I am gonna target mobile devices only.

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            I appreciate your help, man.

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