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New "intent-oriented" landing page... feedback?

Hey everyone! I recently spent some time entirely reworking my landing page to focus more on intents—that is, how people would actually interact with my product.

Would love to know what you all think: https://lensant.com

Thanks! And stay healthy.

on April 5, 2020
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    Hi Miles,
    Loving this product - it's a very lucrative market!
    My question to you would be who are you targeting? What's your niche?
    I sometimes tell clients I consult - if you're targeting everyone who has the problem, you're targeting none of them. Let me explain - when you write "your business, project, or other interest " - you're not talking to me. And you need to talk to me because you're not Google or Amazon yet. Your project page says you make $0 revenue - so you need to get to $100 and then to $1k and then to $10k and so on...
    So my question to you would be - if you need to get $100 of recurring revenue - and that's it, after that you've won, the fight is over - how would you do that? and I'm pretty sure, your answer would need a different message on your landing page.
    Find a VERY niche segment to focus on - get those initial customers to give you $100 in revenue and only then focus on enlarging that to $1K. Usually, by digging deeper into that segment.
    The general - everyone who has this problem should sign up - I feel is very far away from where you are.
    Hope this helps,
    Jonathan

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      Thanks! This is helpful advice. Will start digging in!

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    Overall looks great. The headline is really clear and concise.

    Quick feedback

    1. I would update the CTA from "Sign up" to copy that motivates the user to click, something like "Start monitoring".
    2. Some of the font sizes could be increased to make it easier to read

    Good luck :)

    -Akhil

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      Awesome, thanks! Will do.