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New landing for Ora.pm, would love your feedback! 🖖

New landing after 2-3 years with the old one. I hacked this myself design and all for 167hours over 2 months. (Tracked them with Ora too) The slowest part was creating all the content like videos and illustrations. The page is using react.

Website: https://ora.pm/home

on December 9, 2019
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    Impressive, great product too. Some ideas how to improve:

    .. The main head is generic. If you think about, "Get your work done. Together" is the default benefit of your entire industry segment! Funnily I did the exact same mistake with my own product (https://BugJail.com) by saying "build better software faster". Then realized I had just described the entire frigging developer tools market.

    .. The readability of sub head "To-do's, timelines" is bad: dark text on dark background.

    .. The entire hero CTA area is visually a massive clump of multiple buttons, fields and ratings.

    .. (!!!) Very feature driven site. Not much talk about customer's pain point, benefits you offer, value prop etc.

    .. Since "all-in-one" is one your main points, maybe there should be also a single longer video that shows how all the different features flow together. Bit slower pace, maybe with captions. I found it hard to parse together clear overview from dozen separate short and fast videos.

    .. Exceptional number of videos that explain the features, but many of them play pretty fast, and i was often "whoa wait what was that just got dragged there exactly", and then video looped to beginning. Sure, it's though balancing between "boring to death" and "confusing the fuck out of" :)

    .. Your main point of "Completely customizable" section didn't click immediately for me. I was oriented thinking more about customization within a single feature, than your (super cool) way. Maybe this section's subhead could have core message along 'Ora can be configured to be anything from simple X to full featured Y, depending on your need'. I'd also consider putting the feature symbols directly above or below the slider.

    .. Only clear "dislike" for me was your use of color. Every section had different color and they didn't seem to come from same palette, just didn't look professional visual design, sorry.

    But, overall awesome, really well done!

    Hope this helps & best of luck

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      Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate it :)

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    Hi Vasil, I really like the look of the site. I have nothing to add to the previous comments other than you have a small typo on your "In Progress" cards which currently read "In Proress".

    I found it on both the "Agile done right" and "How it works" sections.

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    Hi Vasil. Site looks beautiful. Great work!

    Only one thought: under What is Ora, you call it an "All-in-one solution". Might be more impactful to use some more specific language. For instance "Best Project Management Solution You'll Ever Use" - but that's a bit too verbose. Something that draws me in....rest of the site is fantastic!

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      Hi and thanks for the feedback! You might be right "All-in-one solution" without any context is a bit obscure.