New landing mockup feedback

I like your mockup. It has all the necessary sections for a landing page to provide enough information for a first-time visitor. You can tell what is the startup right from the cover thanks to the short heading text and your screenshot. A couple minor suggestions in terms of spacing and alignment:

1. In the second section, write more content for "Productivity loss" so the vertical space between icons would be equal for all items.
2. In features section (after the blue-backgrounded section) would be nice to change copy and have all the items in a single line. Right now 2 of them occupy two lines.

Hey @maxim_leonovich! Mockup looks great, however I have a few comments on the copy:

In general, it would help to make all your copy more action, rather than statement, focused.

For example, "Build a knowledge base straight from your Slack notifications" works really well, however, "Self-driving documentation" and "Poor knowledge management leads to", less so.

Try to frame all of your statements as action-driven solutions to your users' problems. As much as possible you should try to make all of your copy start with a verb on a landing page.

If you need a hand with your copy feel free to reach out at dani@scribly.io - would be happy to help.

Best of luck!

Very well design landing page!

1. Not sure if current explainer video wouldn't be better than static image in the backgroud.
   Maybe you could add some logos under first section to build credibility? Like: media features or some known happy customers?
2. Very nice illustrations
3. In section: "Internal Knowledge is the most.." mock ups will change according to headings? If yes, I'm not sure if I would click them.
4. Footer seems to be a bit empty. Adjust "Support" column to other 2.

I hope it helped :)

I like it, pretty neat. I would suggest adding social proof like right after the hero/header if you have clients already.