Hi IH!
I'm testing a new value prop for my site. It is for reading and reflection. Probably it'd stay a niche, but it's something I've been wanting myself. I'd love your thought on the page, especially if the message makes sense!
If you leave your site in a comment, I will give thoughtful feedback in exchange. Let's pull our crowd of wisdom!
Awesome stuff @massanishi
The landing page is sleek and well designed.
Feedback:
I'm also updating my site, your feedback would be helpful!
Hey felix12777, apology for the late reply.
Hope this helps!
Hi,
Same as @tjcx, I don't clearly understand the pain point and the value proposition.
From a UI standpoint, the Serif font is a good idea but you can go for something more original on Google Fonts for instance.
In essence, I'd bring out the value of the product (and make the CTA clearer).
Good luck :)
(if you want to help: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/would-love-to-hear-your-thoughts-ed343dcca4)
Ok thanks michel! Ugh I hate fonts... My number one weakness. If you know a good font to try, let me know!
For your site;
Impressions
Confusing parts
Hope it helps!
Thanks!! Lovely, good food for thoughts :)
As for fonts, the one on my landing page is Playfair Display, I like Merriweather too!
https://fonts.google.com/?category=Serif
Man, love getting feedback like that. Sparkles good ideas, it's awesome :)
And yes, tips can be an option for the Action Button :)
Thanks for the font!
Yapyap, let's keep up the good work for our users💪
Hi Masatoshi! I like that you're trying out different versions of your landing page.
Looking at both the current landing page and the one linked above, I'd say that both are very vague. People rarely sign up for a product because they want to "Grow faster" or find a "Path to ideas." From what I can tell, Kaffae tracks my online reading habits, so (1) I can review what I've read and (2) share what I've read with others. I think creating a landing page around these concrete features might be more successful.
Also it'd be nice to have a screenshot of the actual product above the fold. I don't want to have to sign up to figure out what the product looks like.
Good luck!
(Also I'd welcome any feedback on https://gangway.io !)
Hey @tjcx,
Love the colors and the header, I would add maybe concrete example of what I can achieve with Gangway. Also maybe I'd put the logos of the services supported in the forefront?
Feedback welcome here too ;) https://www.indiehackers.com/post/would-love-to-hear-your-thoughts-ed343dcca4
Thanks for looking at both pages, tjcx!
Okok, the message being too abstract. I will try to be more specific of what you can do with it! It's true about the screenshots!
Here's the flow in order of my impression. I'm thinking out loud.
Continuing...
Hope it helps!:)