New landing page - feedback please?
We just launched a new landing page for RecollectYou.com
We've had high traffic, low conversion so really trying to fix our proposition.
https://www.recollectyou.com/home-1.html
Any thoughts and feedback would be incredibly welcome! (I'll give ya a 50% discount to say thanks)
My two cents: it feels a bit crowded, upon landing on the page I don't know what to look at first, I would suggest trying a calmer font, maybe including a second font ( a reading font for the text, and a title font for titles), and add more vertical spacing overall between the different blocks.
mobile or desktop?
I watched your website on desktop.
Cheers dude
stopped checking after 1 sec due to the pop up.
We are in 2020, please finally stop those pop ups. There's a reason why adblockers are so highly used.
And another 2020, why should I give you my user dates? Prove to me to have valid content first.
Sorry if I'm harsh.
Way way to much content on your landing page. Reduce! Reduce! Reduce!
The latest best example of a very good landing page I could see is https://notionmetrics.com/
Remember, you get about 3 seconds of a user to decide wether he will stay or not.
Were you on mobile?
There shouldn't be a pop up anymore urgh
I have started to simplify
https://www.recollectyou.com/home-2.html
desktop
You definitely need to work on your main section. Too much illegible () text, and on mobile the whole screen gets filled with text.
Same feedback for the example you're showing (Mat has sent you Sam a gift). Too much text. Maybe you can reduce the amount of text and replace with images / icons or emojis.
Not sure how we'd do that - it's a real example and any less instruction, customers have struggled with
Sorry if it came off as being negative. I just meant that the example (and hence the real page which shows this gift) could be better designed.
Maybe you can break it up into different cards which appear one by one (sorta like the Snapchat / FB stories thing). So essentially you'll be showing all the text, but at the same time, less text will be shown to the user. Just my 2 cents on this.
Cheers :-)
Yeah not an issue at all. :D
There is a lot going on, too much. Too many colors, no structure, moving parts and no branding. Some tough love feedback, but after 5 seconds I really had to leave the site.
appreciate it - i'm definitely design constrained
This is supposed to be a feel good type of landing page but it didn't make me feel anything. It need proper branding. Design on these types of products can't be overlooked.
fair play
404 - Page not found
yup it moved to homepage - sorry
Some quick feedback- I got a pop-up once I landed on the site. I don't think that was necessary. It's hard to read the white font on the picture background. Similar for the Soundcloud files against 'RecollectYou'
great!
I think the main issue is targeting actually
I’d suggest a different San serif font. Also the white text on images is a bit painful to read. Using an iPhone so maybe it’s different on laptop, just what I noticed.
great shout
Hey @Quinndawg | your second link gets a 404 error
You have a great potential product. I can see why you have low conversion compare to what you are suppose to have.
I can help you get more conversion by doing your landing page. Memory is linked to your emotion. It's a Gold Mine when write correctly.
I am a copywriter. I help people to have conversion they deserve
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for sure i'd love to hear more
Let's get out of IH to come back stronger
What's your email?
mquinn2489@gmail.com
I got a 404 error with your link: https://tinyurl.com/y2pt7due
Shit sorry - I pushed to production - just the home page now