Hi all,
After reading a lot of the recent feedback on others pages I've attempted to take it onboard and reduce the amount of fluff content on my own.
My target market is SME marketing teams / creative design agencies producing websites for their clients.
If you have 10 minutes spare please let rip and let me know what you think. Is it clear the aim of the service, the target market, and most importantly, the pricing plans?
Thanks.
Hey, this is an interesting service I had never thought about before, but it seems to make sense.
A few things about the landing page:
Please be careful with my advice as I am not a professional in web design and only write what caught my eye.
Thanks for your comments. I've found a good alternative theme to swap over and hopefully will produce a full mini site during Feb. With clearer content over a few pages so it's less all in one.
I am a techie but confused by your landing page. What are you? A Wordpress hosting which offers super fast page load time?
That is the part which is currently under review. I posted a little while back about web hosting which might be an add-on to our main service - Web Hosting - Life Time Deal or Long Term Deal & Community based support
In brief our original plan was to offer a website crawler that will go over the customers website daily to make sure cached copies of the pages load, making page times faster. Not all web hosting offers it which is why the "optimised wordpress hosting" part was added to show its a pre-req for getting better performance, or at least having a caching plugin installed. This then lead in to why not offer hosting as well, so they could be taken up in any combination.
This looks nice with some clear benefits described.
I was confused by the heading: "Our Website Crawler + Optimised WordPress Hosting " which gave me the impression you product offers web hosting.
I also still don't know what "Crawl Filtering" is. Maybe it could link somewhere to "Learn more" or explain what it is and what the benefit is.
Thanks for those comments. I've tweaked the Crawl Filtering box:
"Tailored Logs"
'Do you have multiple content owners / large website? Schedule multiple crawls per day - filtered to key service pages, blog content or FAQ's. The resulting logs can be sent to different owners.'
Hopefully that should be a little clearer now.
As for hosting, I am currently trying to decide about offering web hosting as well, for a combined offering (tool on its own, or hosting on its own, or both as packaged service). The rest of the page is worded for the "tool" part currently. Would people trust new hosting from a previously unknown provider rather than taking a trial with a tool is my main blocker on that currently.
Yes, that is clearer, I think I understand the feature now.
I think you should change so bright colors like the orange and green for something clean
check out my LP for some inspiration nolly.io
That does look quite clean and fresh. Do like the colour pallet. Design is not my strong point but will try and play with a couple of toned down backgrounds.
A couple of minor text tweaks in return.
"Ship Better Products" missing a capital L in 'let'.
"Bug reports" missing a capital on its desc.
FAQ, 5th Post not starting with a capital.
Nice idea for product.
Dave
thank you Dave for checking out my product
if you're not good at design try to follow some guidelines and good practices
check lapa.ninja they list a lot of well designed landing pages to get inspired
all the best