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New landing pages using some indie hackers advice!

Hi hackers,

About a month ago I got some advice on our old landing pages i.e. our main page and our waitlist page. Some from indie hackers and some from various other internet friends.

For example it was too static, had too little copy, didn't make sense, too small to read, and not enough incentive to sign up.

We completely revamped it with that advice in mind and I'd love to hear new feedback to continue iterating :D

Also, I'll check out your pages if you check out mine ;D

https://www.marpipe.com/

on April 16, 2020
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    The landing page looks fantastic! Well done.

    If I had to pick on, I would change the top section of the page. Instead of a lovely illustration, I'd change it to an animation that is in the "generate" section. - which quickly illustrates how the application works.

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      Thanks Marcin!

      That might make sense given the advice from Neera too. I'll see how it fits

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    Hey @brettfriedman

    Really like your design sense and all the colors combination are stong move! Except one thing, the email input field doesn't look like an input field and it's kind of small.

    I will keep your landing page on my nice landing page collection :D

    I put up a small project recently, keen to know your feedback!

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      Thanks Felix. Good note to make the input field look bigger and more obvious.

      Ventures list is an excellent resource. Would've loved to have had this when we were raising our seed round. Only feedback is regional: I'm in the US and there were few US investors. Think it'd also be cool to see some angels in there i.e. individuals that invest their own personal money.

      Amazing idea. i have it saved and I'll be sure to share it with my pre-raise buddies :D

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    On mobile (Android, Chrome) the header stays transparent as you scroll down and therefore the header gets jumbled up with the body and becomes difficult to read.

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      Thanks Alfredo, gotta fix that ASAP

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    I didn't understand "AUTOMATE CREATIVE LEARNINGS. DISCOVER THE BEST CASE SCENARIO." at all. Only when I scrolled down and read "SEAMLESSLY CREATE HUNDREDS OF CREATIVE VARIANTS IN THE TIME IT TAKES TO CREATE JUST ONE", it made more sense. May be you should move it to the top?

    Here's one idea:

    <h1>Maximize your ad's conversion rate using thousands of small automated A/B tests</h1>
    <h2>Create hundreds of creative ad variants in the time it takes to create one. Deploy them seamlessly on multiple ad platforms. Track performance. Iterate.</h2>

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      Thanks for pointing this out. The copy still needs work if it's still unintelligible. Thanks for the pointers in the right direction too