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New landing + pricing + sign up flow - please critique ๐Ÿ™

After what feels like a long and grueling effort I finally shipped a new landing page for SVG Flipbook with a pricing section and a sign up flow (14 day free trial) for new users.

https://svgflipbook.com/

I would really appreciate any feedback from this community. Thank you so much!

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    Congrats on shipping a new page ๐Ÿ™Œ I took a look, and here are my initial reactions:

    1. Switching between pages, I was very confused as to why the menu was changing. It felt flickering/broken and took my attention away from the page. You want people to focus on your product, instead of getting distracted by the menu.

    2. I wasn't quite sure what the product is here. It seems the screenshots show other apps that aren't what you're selling? As a visitor, I would like to see your product instead, so I can better understand the value prop.

    Take it with a grain of salt, as I've no experience with this field. Maybe it is clear for the target audience.

    1. The Windows XP UI does not assure me that this is an up-to-date, still-supported product. If I chanced upon this landing page from Google, I would immediately assume this is a defunct product.

    2. Otherwise, I really like how clean the page is. It seems well structured, concise, no fluff, and the information seems to flow well (though again - hard to judge for me).

    I hope that's useful, good luck with the product!

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      This is really solid feedback, thank you, I will fix the things you've suggested. ๐Ÿ™

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    Sweet idea, seems like you had a pain point with how you created and solved it for the masses.

    I would agree with the other comment in that you should explain what the app is. I'm a Mac user and I immediately assume I can't use it because of the screenshots (which maybe true).

    Great start though!

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      Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback.

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    I don't know what an SVG is. Is it a popular file type ?

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      Yep, its a graphics format which some designers use. My target customer will already know what an SVG is.

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    Cool idea. I noticed all of the screenshots are Windows. Does this work on Mac? This might be a lot of work but, curious about a flow where users could download the app without making an account. And then the app itself prompts for sign up, payment, etc. Also curious if this could work as a Figma or Sketch plugin.

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      Yes this works on Mac. The app is not downloaded, it's a pop-up window from your browser which you run beside your existing editor. This is all very unclear and I'll try to improve the messaging, thanks!

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