Newsletter landing page and pitch text feedback
Hello everyone!
So this is about https://colorsandfonts.com
Some weeks ago I decided to make a newsletter...
Now, the value on those emails, is that I send a complete color palette with 4 different color codes, and an image explaining how to they have been used.
Now, my questions are this.
- is this the right pitch?
- What would you change?
- What would you remove?
I have a CTA section showing what they get on top of the footer in the landing page and then a landing page for it.
https://colorsandfonts.com/newsletter.html
all feedbacks are very welcome.
thank you so much.
Hey ! This is what I noted.
1.Are you going to be sending 4 different color palettes per week or one color palette with 4 colors per week ? The information on that needs to be a little more clear.
2.In the newsletter section I suggest you give the steps beneath the image more importance.You could replace the images with simple icons and make the text bigger to help the user get a better idea of what you're offering.
3.You could also keep the 'enter your email' and the subscribe button in one line.
Cheers
Dhiksha
Oh, I explain. Every week I send 1 color palette with 4 different color codes, HEX, RGB, HSL and SASS variables for each color, including the greyscale used.
When the user signs up, they get 4 different color palettes just for signing up, as a thank you.
I used to have icons actually, but I removed them and used images because it felt out of context, mostly because I do not have icons anywhere else, but footer.
Yeah, I could definitely keep them in 1 line...
Thanks a lot, @dhiksha_venkat
Hi Could you explain what you are solving?
Hi !
Well, when the email comes with a a whole color palette. You will see the codes for the colors HEX, RGBA, HSL and SASS variables.
When I send a color palette a part of the colors, i take a random UI part, like a dashboard and and zi brake down where the colors have been used.
You can see it in this Figma file if you want to.
https://www.figma.com/file/fUTrLfB3QEKebcR9AoHdyb/Colors-and-Fonts-Newsletter-Public-colorsandfonts.com
Thank you so much.
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I am working ok this now, is not finished, but how does it feels?https://www.colorsandfonts.com/newsletter.html
Thank you.
I am getting overwhelmed with that newsletter landing page. I am sort of stuck. I have changed it now with icons as I had before..but then... it does not feel right either...n