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Nitpick my landing page! Am I going wrong somewhere?

Hello Indie Hackers there,

I have a website which focused on selling digital wedding invitations and recently I have designed a landing page which is not getting enough search appearance and conversions.

I request you to provide me feedback on my landing page as to:

  1. What needs to be improved in terms of its design or SEO friendly texts.
  2. Have you been able to understand what my business has to offer, from my landing page?
  3. Nitpick my landing page.

URL or my landing page is: https://wecards.weebly.com/indian-wedding-cards.html

I would like to thank you very much in advance for providing me with great feedback.

on March 30, 2020
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    Hi,

    • Move your "Top Invitation Designs" so it's 1st thing people see.
    • Ditch the black backgrounds (topic is wedding not funeral).
    • Add image of an amazing wedding.
    • Qu: Do sites on weebly subdomains get traction?

    Good luck

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      Thanks Rab for your honest feedback,

      I have actually not put up an image because it always reduces my site speed by a greater percent, but now i will find out a way by using web compressed image.

      Yes Rab, Weebly website do get traction (to be honest not that much! It's ok types) and SEO in a Weebly subdomain site is a tough game because it is rigid.

      And what do you mean by adding an image of a wedding..like do you want me to place image of bride and groom or general wedding images?

      Thanks again

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        And what do you mean by adding an image of a wedding..like do you want me to place image of bride and groom or general wedding images?

        Just suggesting to add a compelling image. Make it appealing. Make the customer think "Oooh, look at that. I want my wedding to be like that" or "I want to feel like that". As you say be concise of image footprint for speed.

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          Ok.. thanks a lot!