Not sure about copies, would you take a look?

There's definitely room for improvement on the copy, and I do believe a good writer can help way beyond simple grammar and language issues. A good copywriter knows how to move people to action.

Whether you you decide to use a copywriter or not, here are a few suggestions:

The headline does a decent job of explaining what the product is, but not why the prospect should want it. Add more of a benefit. What's the pain point you are solving?

The subhead is too similar to the headline. Instead of repeating information, use it to add more context or expand on the idea in the headline. If you make the headline more about the benefit (the why) then the subhead can tell the what or how to pay it off.

It's not clear what the goal of the page is. Let's say I'm interested; how do I start using it? Is there someplace to sign up? There is a form to create a code, but it's unclear what that does or if is simply an image of the product. Make sure your call to action and offer are crystal clear.

I'm not sure how effective the selling points you lay out will be. Are potential issues with hardware really a concern or pain point? In my experience pos hardware is usually pretty reliable. In fact, I think there's a greater chance of something going wrong with customers' phones.

I think there's also much that is missing. You need to address potential objections and questions in the readers' minds that could prevent them from moving forward. For example, is it secure? Do customers need to download an app to use it? That would make it more inconvenient for them. Etc.

I wouldn't link out to another site on your anding page. That can be good for content marketing, but in conversion-focused writing you want to keep everything focused on moving people to your call to action.

I hope that helps. Best of luck.

Copy is good.

Could be 1% tighter in places maybe:

• "Easily receive in-person card payments from customers via their mobile device using QR Codes."
• "Avoid hardware problems."

An animated explainer video in the hero section could be good.

Best of luck

Oh Wow... your product is awesome. Your copy looks okay especially for a non-native speaker.
However, if you ever decide you need to contract a writer, I'd love to work with you.
I really love what you are creating.
Best of luck.

I think the copy is fine.

And the product is mad-cool.

Like Square, but no hardware. Nice.

Hi, Could you tell me what are you selling and how yours is different and stands out from your competitors.?.

Hey,
I visited your site, and it looks great. I'm sure the functionality is great too. Your copies look professional so you don't have to worry. I noticed that you don't have a logo. I could help you with that. Would you like to take a look at my work?