Notion/Slack users - can I get your feedback on the Landing Page?
Here is a link to the website, Otiv.Dev: https://otiv.dev
I would love to hear what I could improve.
- Is it clear what is being offered?
- Would you use the product? Why not? What excites you?
Anything that will help me improve the chances of success will be most helpful 🙏
Currently my goal with landing page is to get some people to sign up so I can get genuine feedback about the product.
Although the core features are working - I have few more improvements planned before I release the "MVP".
Afterwards I will try to pay for the ads on Twitter and Google so I can measure ROI. So if you are curious how that will go follow me.
Thanks all!
Hey Vito,
Checked the site. I think the headline is not very convincing.
What if I'm an agile team but not using slack or notion ? A narrower definition of the audience will help.
"Improve the way you work." => Sounds too generic. Saying How exactly you would do this will be better.
Cheers,
Prakash
That's great feedback.
I'll definitely revise the headline and the CTA texts.
Thank you Prakash
I like the design. There is room for improvement, but at this stage the only thing I would bother is to address key points with the copy. I've added some ideas for you to consider - https://visualdebug.com/show/otiv.dev
That's fantastic. I will get on to these suggestions this evening! Thank you.
Sure, ping me if you need any further help!
I like it a lot! I almost installed but I felt like managing the to do list would become another burden on top of the tasks on it.