Obligatory landing page feedback post
Hi IH,
Validating a product idea and would like some feedback on the landing page.
I work in the music industry and watch on daily as people everywhere churn out artist "one-sheets". It's a manual process that sucks up a huge amount of time. The same data points get reused by different people and instantly go out of date. The formating and design comes in all form factors and is always terrrible. Hence the product.
Going to use various APIs to automate data entry and provide a template that (hopefully) looks great.
Let me know your thoughts, thanks for looking 👀
Hey Stevie. The page looks nice, but some things are not very clear.
In case you’re still looking for more feedback, I’ll be more than happy to give you my detailed thoughts.
Me and my partner will be giving personal real-time feedback in a video chat for this whole week to help other founders.
Check out http://flounders.io/ for the details.
Hope to see you there.
P.S.: Anyone who wants to get feedback is also welcomed 👍
Nice job on the page! The headline is clear and impactful. The messaging is structured well. And the layout is nice and clean.
You might want to tweak some of the copy a bit. The repetitive use of the phrase “no more” made it feel a bit stale. And the wording is a few spots was a bit awkward and confusing. But overall, I think your messaging is strong.
Best of luck!
It looks great on mobile! I dig the colors
Thanks! Tried to keep it a bit muted.
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Definitely focusing on labels and managers, where you tend to have multiple people across a team creating one-sheets for a variety of artists. There's no reason why it wouldn't work for individuals, but I don't think that's where the real problem lies.
Part of this validation piece will be sussing out market fit. Your feedback is very useful, will make it clearer on the landing page that this is really aimed at larger teams.
Thanks!
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That's a fair point, we are totally shooting blind with pricing but wanted to over-egg it slightly as any validation at this price point is a good sign we're on the right track.
We also thought that the time saved would easily justify $50/mo, but you may be right in so far as audience - if the primary market fit is smaller indies and DIY operations we'll probably have to reduce that price point.
Can I ask what you used to do in the music biz?
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