Okay people, you know the drill, tear it to shreds

I don't think you've done enough to warrant someone giving their email address.

Everything above the fold makes this look like a blog post, so when someone scrolls down and sees the call-to-action, I'm betting most will be disappointed or feel like you're pulling a bit of a bait and switch.

What makes this worth waiting for? Why should someone take the time and effort to give up their contact information rather than seeking the information they are looking for elsewhere?

Until you can answer that convincingly, I don't see this page working.

As someone has already mentioned, you need to get this proof-read/run through Grammarly.

I don't think it looks particular flashy for a landing page, and might suggest looking at something like Carrd as an affordable way to make a landing page that pops more.

BUT I'm not even sure you need to do that. You have a very clear message, and your offer is something any SaaS startup would be interested in.

As an aspiring SaaS copywriting, I've signed up. Others will too.

I hope this helps

Jon

Proofread first, and go into a little bit of detail.

Good thing:
✅Hits the nail on the head
✅ Easy to read/to the point
Missing:
❎ No testimonials
❎ No preview chapter/article
❎ No about me page