Online & Offline Stories/Memorials - Feedback on MVP & Homepage needed!

Hey guys,

Here's some backstory:

I have an interest in my family history and since all my grandparents are no longer around I wanted a place to gather pictures, videos, and their life stories together. Nothing that was currently available really looked nice or simple to use - you couldn't easily try them out without an account and I decided to create my own version instead.

I also had one of my cousins put together a small book on the life story of one of my grandmothers and get a few copies made for the family which we all loved. So along with the digital aggregation of text/images & video, I thought it would be great to also give people the option to purchase a book of online memories which could then be delivered to them. Obviously, the book would be text and images only but it would still be a lovely item to have and give people the chance to gift the memories to older family & friends.

Where I've gotten to so far:

• A basic MVP is online - no account needed
• I've used this to create a simple site detailing one of my grandfather's life stories. See here: https://thestoryof.io/view/1/kevin-kearney-dodds

Next steps:

• Get the book-creation working correctly - have this 50% completed
• Ability to have family & friends comment on the different sections (pending admin approval)
• More privacy options
• Ability to upload video (perhaps this might be a paid feature)
• A setup wizard?

Looking for feedback on:

1. The landing page
2. Using the page editor (still plenty of improvements to be made)
3. General feedback also welcome!

Thanks,