PackBrand - Create Beautiful Product Packaging in 5 mins(without photoshop/designers)
Hi guys!
Very excited and nervous at the same time to launch my first landing page.
Easily design and build beautiful Packaging for your product.
Our platform will render your product in real time as you make changes, so you can see exactly how it will look without doing test prints
It's like Webflow/Squarespace but for product packaging .
Please let me know what your thoughts about the copywriting, and the content on the website. Any feedback is welcome!
LET THE ROASTING BEGIN!
Thank you so much!!
Very good idea and nice job on the landing page implementation! I feel that you are repeating the value prop right below it with the same words. Does it make sense to have something like:
<h1>Instantly Create Stunning Packaging for your product</h1>
<h2>See how your product will look on the shelves. Get printer ready files in minutes.</h2>
<strong>Without the hassle of photoshop or outsourcing.</strong>
BTW there is a typo on your landing page. Change "selves" to "shelves".
Thank you!!
The value prop does feel a little repetitive, the pain we are trying to address is how hard it is to design nice looking packging when you are launching a new product. I guess that should be front and center!
hi there,
Really nice animations, pretty slick. Loved the page overall. If I have to be picky here are some issues:
I would add a sticky bar with the main CTA in there. As there is a lot of sections without any CTA.
I see the animations are actually videos but cant the colour match the background colour? https://i.imgur.com/bM6BywU.png
The final CTA should popup out a bit more, at the moment blends with the other footer elements - https://i.imgur.com/lgIzj61.png
Favicon missing
Is this how this section is supposed to be = https://i.imgur.com/hYQE7dv.jpg looks broken and the dotted pattern shouldn't cover the text.
https://i.imgur.com/kDQNS6G.png I would do a promotion like a 10% discount for 6 months and change the CTA text to "Add me to your waiting list" rather than "Subscribe"
Overall very cool
Keep up the good work!
thanks
Waseem
Thanks for the awesome feedback! I see the problem with the animations, looks like the color profile for the video might be off! Probably good idea to test on multiple machines and diff browsers!
Great suggestions on the CTA and the copywriting text.
Was the feature and the intent of the product explained clearly? Or was it too wordy?
No problem, happy to help.
Re: copy, I would keep the text length consistent.
https://i.imgur.com/gjT1XgM.png
Reduce the text here
https://i.imgur.com/78qq19t.png
overall aim to have 3 paragraphs max.
Thanks
Waseem
(p.s. please upvote me if you liked my recommendations, tx).
great suggestions!! Will make some formatting changes
Nice execution @phoenixashes
Really like the landing page design and the service looks promising. Will wait to see the actual product. Have you also look at Artboard Studio?
I'm also improving a side hustle, keen to hear your feedback!